Thursday 20 August 2015

hide and seek

hide and seek

1.the tree moves to me slowly.
2.The big waves push me like i was sand.
3.the house stairs at me like i was and outlaw.
4.the grass rushes past me as fast as a lion.
5.the smoke follows me into the street.
6.the ground moves me around like water.
7.the sky crushes me into the ground.


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4 comments:

  1. HI Reilly I like the poem but I can't see the yellow line so can you change it so I can see it. Liam

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  2. Hi Reilly
    I really like your blog post and how you said.The smoke follows me into the street and The big waves push me like I was sand.
    From Haylee

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