Wednesday 6 May 2015

Anzac poem

As the night of the day dawned war was still ago as every soldiers fighting at there mite the trenches were full of men battling it out for there country the planes begin in the sky dropping bombs and shooting at the enemy's so many lost few to go. 

1 comment:

  1. great job Reilly, good poem it really put a pitcher in my mind. but next time remember to check and re-check get a buddy to read it out.

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